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    Al I got out of this, was that both Ewan and Lennox long for Jay, but because they can't have her, they find some sorta replacement for her. Yeah.....

    On a good note, at least we got to see the wedding between Jay and Jarte.

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    Please please update soon.

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    yeah, it was cute. I'll agree to that. But Wann should really have focused in ending the actual story in a far far better way. This chapter by no means makes up for the lack of depth and the rushed nature of the ending.

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    Yeah, I did comment earlier, and I totally agree with everyone's disappointment at the ending of this story. What a let down! It's even beyond disappointing the more I read on about it.

    I just wanted to make a prediction for this up coming epilogue. I'm leaning towards Jay being pregnant and that is the reason for needing to go to the "appointment"

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    so we waited aaaaaall this time for the main story to end like that? And like simoonie and boxofmochi have already mentioned the black pages....wow to be honest that was just...disappointing. Just disappointing....

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    5

    Good chapter, but that end:not good at all. Seriously, not the best way to leave us, especially since it has been cliffhangers this entire time. Why can't we just have a chapter that ends without such anticipation, and puts us at east until the next chapter, especially since we have to wait more than 2 weeks now.

    Most definitely a lousy way to end a chapter....

    On another note, perhaps Jarte doesn't get shot (we saw Kairen making his way to fight the bad guys once he had Lennox in his custody). But then again, maybe Jarte does get shot, and struggles to keep his hold onto Jay, and Kairen comes in later to take of the rest. I've noticed that this story has barely a moment's peace. Stress, action, anticipation. Really!

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    5

    Action packed chapter, definitely entertaining. But again, leaves you wanting for more.
    Don't want anybody else to die in this series, but seriously can't trust Wann on that one. Let's see....awaiting that "happy ending" like dkfurukawa has mentioned :)

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    5

    Finally, we get Jay's confession of love (although it's not to Jarte himself, but oh well, it's better than nothing). Plus, the start of an action packed next chapter.

    Thanks Netcomics, definitely looking forward to the next chapter ^__^

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    5

    Like last time's chapter. It's good to see that they're talking, and everything that they felt towards each through all that time is being revealed. I'm a little skeptical about the last thing Jay asks Jarte (on the last page). Hopefully, he won't give her those stupid reasons for having her beside him now, as opposed to what he really feels.

    Here's to progress between J&J ^__^

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    5

    It's great to see that they're finally opening up about all the things that happened between them. It's definitely progress. What I got from this chapter was that it almost felt like, first of all Jarte spilling out his feelings about everything that went wrong between them, and then the chapter just ended with Jay beginning to spill out her feelings.

    I thought, it almost felt like they were taking turns in getting things out in the open. Too bad the chapter just ended like that -.-;
    I do agree with beloved828, though since we haven't really seen what Jay has completely said about the incident where she was framed by Ewan, it's really hard to say she blames him wholly. I was thinking it was Jay's way to justify her reasoning as to why she believed Jarte no longer loved her.
    Oh and also, I was thinking, that the reason why Jay consistently fails to be angry at the right people like Ewan and Luigi, may be perhaps is because she doesn't care about them all that much, and doesn't have much in terms of expectations from them. Perhaps that's why she never gets furious at either at them. I dunno, it was just a thought ;)

    Can't wait for the next chapter, I really want to see what Jay says, and what's next for our stubborn couple hehe.

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